Well guys this is my beginners Flash Website. It's not got alot of info on it, it's mainly just a page I constructed for school and didn't get to spend too much time on with all my other subject demanding time but I hope you like it.

Any suggestion, comments plz I'd love to hear what you think and how it could be improved.

Please be nice

:classic: .

Also it's a geocities site and I've put it under a free page so it might exceed bandwidth here and there as a flash page is about 1.5mb not exactly small due to the way I incorporated the imaging something to work on. :stupid:

Anyway Enjoy!

www.geocities.com/gavin_doolan/

less than 30 minutes after your post, the bandwidth has been exceeded.

I'll try to check it out again later

where it says enter and email and i tried to enter and well i had gotten no further:stupid:

It should load but if your using a 56k connection may take a while if your on cable shouldn't be a problem. It's about 1.5mb because I didn't compress it as well as I should have.

Also it may be possible the server exceeded it's limit.

I'll give it a whizz tomorrow when my download'o'meter resets back to 0.

Gav240z ,

I LOVE it.

Never take it off the web.

no matter what you do at least keep it on geocities.Websites seem to stay there forever.

I'm on 56K took me a cuple of minutes to come up.

-Brandon

Took me 10 minutes (damn 56k) while browsing other sites though but it was well worth it. Good looking site Gav.

My criticism- Menu wasn't my cup of tea and the writing in the 'My 240Z' was a bit hard to read but love the growing effect.

Anyhoo, any site with my car on it deserves at least a 9/10 :classic:

Can't wait to see your second effort.

hmmm gav i'm trying to access it now from work on cable...spew it's not working for me!

I also got an error when trying to enter

Not sure why it would do that is your Flash plug in up to date?

Could be Geocities being dodgy I would have paid for a site but it's only a sample sorta of what I'd like to do.

If time permits I'll try and make a better page these holidays :classic: .

Just keep trying at different intervals and hopefully it will work.

great site man, i plan on learning flash eventually to incorporate it into my site, it really brings it to that next level of professionalism you know? great job man, i cant wait to start doing some of that myself, maybe when i get done painting my car:cheeky:

-Zach

how did you do it? what software did you use?

its nice(ur page), make the changes a little bit slower, and cover the whole screen so it will be clearer. (just my $0.02 comment).

Originally posted by Gav240z

Well guys this is my beginners Flash Website. It's not got alot of info on it, it's mainly just a page I constructed for school and didn't get to spend too much time on with all my other subject demanding time but I hope you like it.

Any suggestion, comments plz I'd love to hear what you think and how it could be improved.

Please be nice

:classic: .

Also it's a geocities site and I've put it under a free page so it might exceed bandwidth here and there as a flash page is about 1.5mb not exactly small due to the way I incorporated the imaging something to work on. :stupid:

Anyway Enjoy!

www.geocities.com/gavin_doolan/